U say I’m awful
but at least I’m honest
u say I’m not thoughtful
but I kept every promise
u chose to leave because I lacked commas
because of u I choose to live in trauma
but the heat from our lust is always hot like a sauna
so closed minded but when you’re horny you’re always open like a diner
see I’m tired of all of your rough patches, I need something finer
I mean I’m not so sharp but more like a b minor
left in the dark so long my heart grew black as coal, who will be my miner
maybe she was right, I’m too laid back like a recliner
the thoughts are nice sometimes, but they bring nightmares of a painful reminder
so at the end of the day I walk away because my life is on a limited timer
Nice flow.
thank u
Enjoy your words- straight and to the point with a great rhythm behind them.
malart
thank u