I tried being her superman but she left me broken and paralyzed like mr. reeves
that’s why I sift those trees and breathe
I mean, only good things I did, rarely told her no
spoiled her for the right reasons
but catch an attitude if I didn’t give anything that show
how low, but then again I was an amateur at this love thing
she was a pro
felt like I was buying her worth
but what did I know, as long as I didn’t get hurt
because honestly she was the first attempt
at that love thing, maybe I was rushing
and to think all those crushes I had didn’t prepare me for this kind of crushing
all that time spent, just to end up with nothing
I guess that sums up false hope
all that working, just to end up broke
I’m starting to think this love stuff is a hoax
I’m sorry
x
Aww thank u….how are u
Exhausted and mad. All I want is a cookie but all these greedy people at this college ate them all 😦 how r u?
haha….im cool…sorry about the cookie
It’s cool I pigged out when I got home. No shame 😛 haha
haha i bet
It’s not a hoax but you have to find the right person. Don’t give up or be afraid. Nice poem
Yeah you’re right….thatnks
You have some great lines here! And even though the experience was bad, at least you made something beautiful here. Also I love the line breaks! 😉
Thank u….and thanks for the advice
Anytime.
Beautiful.
We must never be afraid to step out and give, even if we risk giving to receive nothing at all; because in fact, we receive the greatest thing in the end…..and that is, the lesson, my friend.
Honesty will never do you like that! If you get me….
🙂
Thank u….very wise words
Nice way to express being open. It’s refreshing when men can express themselves.
thank u…I try to be as real as I can….thank u for following by the way I really appreciate it
No problem. Thank YOU.
may I ask what am I being thanked for….haha
Because you followed me first! lol
aw no problem…Im looking forward to reading more of your work
Thanks. Likewise.
No haux. It’s just not your time yet! Although all relationships require work, when you meet the person who is meant for you, the connection will be effortless.
-Shanice Nicole
yeah i feel u…thanks for the wise words